I read these poems tonight at our little monthly open reading here. It was a fine night and the poems read well, though I've since made a change to "On Poetry of the Personal" because while I read it, the "Those robins..." in the 6th stanza, 2nd llne, inexplicably came out my mouth 'These robins..." which I think makes more sense in the poem. That kind of thing has happened before due to a reading. Kind of magic!
Three moving, beautiful poems to awake our senses and our minds.
I read these poems tonight at our little monthly open reading here. It was a fine night and the poems read well, though I've since made a change to "On Poetry of the Personal" because while I read it, the "Those robins..." in the 6th stanza, 2nd llne, inexplicably came out my mouth 'These robins..." which I think makes more sense in the poem. That kind of thing has happened before due to a reading. Kind of magic!
I’d to hear you read your work. I will read again later today. It’s amazing how one little change can be the magic touch.